From the Dark Depths of the Addventure comes a short piece about Kerry, a quiet and unassuming bank teller, who bought a ring at a novelty store. The results are quite . . . novel.
Well, no not really. Stories about growing breasts are posted here all the time, but for Kerry, for whom this sort of thing does not happen every day, I suppose you could say it is novel.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.14
- BE: 4.14
- Characters: 4.00
- Technical: 4.57
moop
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
buddyu
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
I liked the story. I hope to see a more.
Pratt Fan
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Bill has quickly become one of my favorite authors within the BE/MC genre both here and at mcstories. Keep up the great work!
Ice0wl
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
I love the evil goddess and the teasing she torments her subjects with, something the previous commenter didn't seem to get. She makes the rules of her reality and nobody escapes her punishment for not following those rules... whether or not they like that punishment is another matter ;)
Mercat
Overall= 3, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
Although a good story, the main character seemed to go from what seemed to be a nice person to bitch in less time it takes a Ferrari Testarosa to go to 0 to 60. Long term, subtle changes would of seemed to of been the way to go in a story like this, especially with how the possibility of a continuation could of developed. The rest of the story really was hard to get into because of this reason. Although most people here liked it, the aggressiveness of the main character really didn't make the story any more enjoyable to me.
Miranda
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Having read all about Ed, I felt I needed to read this story also. I wasn't disappointed. Very nice..... I do hope there's more to come..........????
Reb
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Nice story, with enough variations to be interesting, not just bigger-bigger-bigger. Decent writing, too.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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