The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Bigby Wolfe
VENUS: Venus in Statu Nascendi
Every superhero has an origin. Alexa's just happens to involve lots of orgasms and giant breasts.
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 toymaker
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 4 
I agree with Phlegm, it was a good story and a nice transformation although it was a short one, and one that seems to be dealt with pretty easily. Maybe the sequel will be more in-depth. 
 Phlegm
Overall= 3, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4 
i liked it a lot, shame it's only one transformation (and from then on she's always venus).
still, i enjoyed it and look forward to more from Venus.
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