grenshaw500@yahoo.com
Cassandra doesn't like Christmas. But not for long, because Santa's got a special present for her, and guess what? It grows.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.20
- BE: 4.40
- Characters: 3.60
- Technical: 4.20
Marina
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I wish you would write a sequel to this, maybe Cassandra could meet another large breasted woman along the way and they could go shopping together and maybe even go on a date if you want to make her a lesbian or bi
Rosa
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I wish there were more stories on this site like this but I cant find them
Jason G
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
Good short story, i like the way you had the tree "appear" in her house. I also could not read the story with the red background. I opened it in notepad and just read through the raw html (which i'm used to, since i still create websites that way). overall good story though!
gman
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
Overall a nice quick ditty. I liked it, much more than say...mother's daughter II. BE was well done, just avoid the bra size comparisons - you're better than that.
Benji Dude
Overall= 3, BE= 4, Characters= 2, Technical= 4
The BE was well described, even if it did use normal bra size format to start. Didn't really care about the character but given the stories length that's hardly surprising. Grammar as a whole was good, formatting was fine except for the background, don't use bright red as a background for anything, it's far too intense. I know you used red but for something like this it's better to keep it simple, just use a white background and black text, it's just so much easier to read.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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