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The Overflowing Bra

Bill Pratt
Ed: Chapter 12
It’s the end of the road for Ed. How can he possibly beat an immortal in a fight to the death? And if he can accomplish the impossible, will he have anything left for The Professor?
Well, it was nice knowing you, Ed.
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Kanodin
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

So sad that you had to end this series. This was quite professional and pithy. I tried to "skip" ahead to the sexy scenes at times, but the material had no superfluous segments, so I was disoriented by how interrelated the different texts were. I definitely have to give this a slower read in the future. Great job!

Chelseaboy
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Can't wait for the follow up story whenever that shall come. Well done had me eagerly awaiting each installment!

Miranda
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

great story, interesting ending...??? or maybe I get to read the next story soon? I really enjoyed this, it's been fun...thanks

fourshot
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

well done! I couldn't wait till the next chapter came out! Bill, YOU rock!

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