This series of stories are based on the serendipitous meanderings of a Westside Sales Manager and his tug-of-war tales of lust and denial for a new Barista at his favorite coffee haunt. The only catch is, is she open to his [would be]advances? Tag along for the twisted ride... as we find out more about both of their areas of weakness.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 2.00
- BE: 2.33
- Characters: 2.33
- Technical: 2.67
Very Free
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 2, Technical= 2
Be? What BE? Like he said, a waste of time until the rest of the story is there
ice0wl
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 2
A story fragment with not even a hint of BE. I don't buy it.
The Handler
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
So far it is a good read, it baits you.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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