The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Jennies On The Block
Fan Fiction with Jennifer Love Hewitt and Jennifer Lopez.
Average Scores:

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

Excellent work! I didn't notice any glaring grammar issues, and the plot was really pretty good. I felt that character development could have used a little work and that the expansion description was cut short too early, but that just goes to show how good it was. ^_^

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