Short story where a patient finds a bottle of BE body wash.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.33
- BE: 4.00
- Characters: 3.67
- Technical: 5.00
Tirithedain
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
I found this to be very well written, especially for a story that's only a few pages.
Blamandude
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
some guy
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 5
This was a vignette, but a good one. The brevity of the story obviously limits what can be accomplished, but the author's descriptions are firm and the characters are developed as well as can be in a couple of pages. There were a couple of awkward phrases, but the writing was technically sound.
I would like to see more from this author, especially if he can make the time to work long form.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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