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Maxine finds that volunteering for scientific trials can lead to strangely desirable side-effects...
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.50
- BE: 3.00
- Characters: 4.00
- Technical: 4.00
Gaffenheimer
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Well, Tenny, you rule. That was a great story. A little silly, with the title and all, but it was very good. Although you could have described her transformations with a little more depth.
dranon
Overall= 4, BE= 2, Characters= 4, Technical= 3
Definitely needs a proofread... some spelling and several punctuation errors, but nothing that detracted from the story too badly. The BE description certainly needed some fleshing out as the process and sizes were barely described at all. Even so, it was still quite enjoyable and a good read overall. Keep it up!
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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