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Corlisant, the ditzy witch girl, imbues a woman's tazer with a BE spell.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.25
- BE: 4.25
- Characters: 4.75
- Technical: 4.25
subastian
Overall= 2, BE= 2, Characters= 4, Technical= 2
Real nice post, i hope you keep posting stuffs like this, thumbs up.
Sucker4Boobs
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Very entertaining. You didn't take too long in getting to the action. Sequel, please!
fosho
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Very well written and funny story. Awesome be description and attention to detail. Light-hearted and fun, just a great read. I hope you're still writing!
Yessir
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
the best story on this site— not a thing wrong with it
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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