Can Ed survive an emotionally charged Melissa, The Professor on the warpath, and the revenge of Pinky?
Average Scores:
- Overall: 5.00
- BE: 4.40
- Characters: 5.00
- Technical: 4.80
Dr. Meagain Big
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Love it, can't wait for more! This story has everything! it's hot!
Mopey
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Another great chapter in your saga.
I enjoy the part of Ed's personality that constantly thinks that he can just "fix" the women by dreaming more. Yet, almost each time he has tried this, he just alters things even more.
Silly protagonist, don't you know that if you give your subconscious desires godlike powers to alter the universe that the results are unpredictible?
At least Ed is tapping into his erotic/carnal Id instead of anything based on fear and power. Whatever mind created/altered the killer plush toys probably hit a less enjoyable portion of his subconscious desires. But this last paragraph is just speculation, I really want to see the author's explanation for all this.
Please continue with your excellent series!
Derob Jacobs
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Normally I don't like mind control stories, but this one is enough to change my mind. (Or else the story is changing my mind for me.)
Miranda
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
awesome! I can't wait to read more. It's erotic without being just pornographic. Please continue, I love everything about it.
Steve
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
This story has it all. It's wonderful. The mysterious bears add a wild and wacky twist. The modification of the women of his dreams are hot! And, what is the professor up to??? Can't wait for the next installment.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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