Ed tries to simplify his life, run a physics lab, and explain the destruction of the brain scanner to The Professor and the recently lesbonified Melissa. But then he runs into the most beautiful girl in the world and .... Well, I'm getting ahead of myself.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 5.00
- BE: 4.00
- Characters: 5.00
- Technical: 5.00
Maniac
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
When the care bear first popped up I couldn't keep myself from laughing. Excellent!
RTPerson
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Malala tet - real cute - mal a la tete - sick in the head or headache.
Permafrost
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Superb Stories, as usual. Keep up the high quality, sir.
Mopey
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Outstanding. Your hard work and excellent word crafting is appreciated. Please keep up the good work.
Anon
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
A nice bridging chapter, can't wait to see where it all leads.
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