The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Zon 18
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Man uses hypnotic screensaver to make a woman a horny slut who wants big tits.
Average Scores:
 Steve
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5 
it was the best i have ever read on this site
 BEman
Overall= 4, BE= 2, Characters= 4, Technical= 5 
Very nice. I really liked this story, the plot and setting really drew me in. I hope to read more from you.
 Mephistofun
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4 
One of the best I have ever read.
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