The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Lucky
unknown
Helpless 3
The balloon girl has a dreadful plan for her boyfriend.
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 Wancozone
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5 
I wonder what our balloon woman is going to give birth to?
 electron
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5 
great series, really creative. I'm interested to see where it goes next!
 Ice0wl
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4 
It just keeps getting better, can't wait for the next part :D
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