The Overflowing Bra

Overall started out pretty solid, I liked the transition from small, shy, and cute to huge, dominating, and horny. I felt that a few of the characters were completely pointless to have Amber and contrary to the beginning where Marks says he always gets along with Naomi, she is a huge bitch. Like previously said, there also needed more comparisons when Mark was smaller and Yuki was bigger. I disliked the end of everyone else was evil and no one ever cared about Mark, and I also take it as Yuki really not caring about the wellbeing of Mark and I take it that he's going to shrink into nothingness, further questioning her love for him so it makes no sense. I liked it at the start, but the end was a huge turnoff.

i like stewy's work. i just wish he would remember that women have a vagina too!not enough growth breast and height.

What can i say? Just read it!

Well-written enough, I suppose (grammer and such) but it wasn't a pleasant read for me; I just didn't like the plot or the characters.

Horror BE never did much for me.  Horror GTS never did anything at all for me.  This one started off decently enough, but...yeah.  Once it was pretty much obvious that all the girls were evil, well...what can I say.  Really cut down on enjoyment.  Another commenter hit the nail on the head with size descriptions...midway through, any comparison at all was completely absent.  Was well-written, tho, just not a very pleasant read.

Very nice story... I only have a few problems though. The first was the sister on brother action at the end.  Another was that they got away with it at the end.  I'm not going to tell you how to write your stories, but it would have been nice to see something like Mark turning the tables at the end and using breastmilk or something like that to get bigger himself and get back at them... I hope you take this into consideration.

This reminds me quite a bit of the stuff Greapos used to do. Same style/fetish, or same person with a new name?

It's a good story, I don't understand why you broke it up into separate files though.
The only problem I have with it is the complete lack of measurements and size comparisons. You might be able to get away with that if the main character wasn't shrinking. But with his perspective changing AND her growing, it was impossible to get a mental grip on the sizes.

The writing was very well done, but the story got progessively ickier. Truthfully I finished reading it like someone people stop and watch train wrecks. Was hoping something nasty would happen to the bitchy sister.

I liked it.  No big comments, just wanted to let it be known.