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A quickie BE where Lara Croft finds a magical orb that causes her breasts to grow to immense proportions.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 3.92
- BE: 4.38
- Characters: 4.31
- Technical: 4.15
Anubis1996
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 3
A great story but it could have been so much better had you added some more arousel. Also, a sequel is in order here as indicated by the last lines in the story.
Dreginy
Overall= 2, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
it was...ok. could've had more arousing moments and BE in the story though.
Sucker4Boobs
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Great story! I loved the descriptions of lactation. It could've been longer, though. Sequel, please!
tsokei
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Well written and good description. Make it longer and write more original stuff. Couldn't hurt to add more arousal too.
Iceman
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Yo. I liked it in general, but please make it longer. You cut the story to the epilogue at the PRECISE point when the villagers enjoy the "feast." Please describe the actual party in the future, rather than alluding to it. Other than that, Nice work. Keep it up.
Gaffenheimer
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
I really liked this one. Straightforeword, well-described, and entertaining! Good job.
LS
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Now that was a good short story. The spelling and grammar were flawless and it was nice to see the inflation make something as simple as getting back to the village a difficult task for Lara.
SkeetSkeet
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
I greatly enjoyed this story. Its always fun to think about Lara Croft in BE scenes and while I'm glad its not overdone I do appreciate your story. Keep up the good work!
Annon
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
You had something a lot of stories here lack - perfect grammar and spelling! Cheers to you for that! To top it off, your story was great as well. Keep up the good work!
Leviathan
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 3
I thought it was good. Keep writing.
xxxecil
Overall= 3, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
straightforward and pleasing in the time honored, classical style of B.E. With a suggestive twist at the end. While not all stories can have toe-curling sex, some erotic breast-play would have made it better.
ILT
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Please, do more! And do it quick!
puzzler
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 3
fantastic. I really enjoyed reading this. i can't wait for the next part but maybay a bit longer next time
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