The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Michael discovers a new power, and tests it one an old girlfriend. But can he control it? Read on and see. 
Average Scores:

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Of course, my favorite type of BE. If there were a website dedicated to ONLY this type of scenario, I'd visit it every day.

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Great story, Exactly what I've been looking for. When I read things like this, I don't usually stop and think, "man, that was a good story."

Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 4

Great stuff, could use a 2nd part where the shrinks down and he does it again, or something. :D

Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

Not bad for a start.. hope there'll be more :)

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