heliumfloater@yahoo.com
Michael discovers a new power, and tests it one an old girlfriend. But can he control it? Read on and see.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.50
- BE: 4.25
- Characters: 4.25
- Technical: 4.50
HeliumGirl
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Of course, my favorite type of BE. If there were a website dedicated to ONLY this type of scenario, I'd visit it every day.
embarassingfetish
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Great story, Exactly what I've been looking for. When I read things like this, I don't usually stop and think, "man, that was a good story."
John
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
Great stuff, could use a 2nd part where the shrinks down and he does it again, or something. :D
IceOwl
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Not bad for a start.. hope there'll be more :)
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