A woman has a flashback in a dream and realizes that she's living a lie. She decided to change her life before it's too late. I've received mixed reactions so far, but I'll assume my story is more female friendly.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 3.63
- BE: 2.25
- Characters: 4.25
- Technical: 4.63
Gaffenheimer
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Good story, I liked it very much. It was pretty breast-centric, though I suppose that if I had any problem, it would be that it didn't focus as much on growth. But still, it had a nice happy ending.
gman1
Overall= 4, BE= 1, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Great writing, but not exactly a BE story. But your style and prose is impressive
rtpoe
Overall= 4, BE= 1, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Technically, an excellent story. Good characters, though the plot seemed to proceed in "jumps" and not quite smoothly. Not much actual "BE", either. For a first story, though, rather good. I look forward to more from this author.
Beman
Overall= 1, BE= 2, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Very well written story, but not exactly what I was looking for. Personally I don't like it, but it wasn't bad.
Toymaker
Overall= 4, BE= 2, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
I liked it. It wasn't perfect, at least not to me- not being a ladyperson, the story wasn't "written for" me, so to speak.
At any rate, the central cast was interesting, the relationships between them were well-thought out, even if some of them (primarily Brianna nad her parents) seem to conclude in a bit of a rush.
There's plenty of massive boobies to go around, and perhaps one of the most arousing things for me was the fact that Brianna *likes* her large chest. That. Is. SEXY. Not as much growth as I'd have liked to see in it, but again, it's not so much for the fellahs.
Keep up the good work!
brit
Overall= 2, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 3
Boring. Not really sexy. Too much ugly, graphic language that didn't really add much to story.
IceOwl
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
If you're looking for an instant wank story, go somewhere else. This one obviously had a lot more thought and emotion put into it than your average BE story. There's not a lot of BE, but it makes up for it with quality over quantitty.
Dol-man_Master
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Nice story! To the whore who said it sucked...GET A JOB! AND GROW UP!
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