The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Helium Floater
lockabar2001@yahoo.com
Growing Problem
Let's try this again. Danielle's breast inflation is getting out of hand, and she consults an unbelieving professional for help with her "Growing Problem". 
Average Scores:

HeliumGirl
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

I like it! I hope to see more soon in this storyline. Dunno why this story seems to be posted twice, though I did rate it all 5s in both instances...

Anonymous
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Awesome story. I really wish you would write more than a couple per year.

anonymous
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 5

Glad the real one got posted - a good read.

visitor
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

A+.
More please!

gman1
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

oh yes!

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