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While out working in the cornfields, Krystal has an odd reaction to some insecticide. Story also known as "Crop Busting".
Average Scores:
- Overall: 3.50
- BE: 4.00
- Characters: 3.00
- Technical: 3.75
Brit
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 2, Technical= 4
Good writing, fast and fluid story telling. BE could have been more descriptive. I liked the narratives voice; very believable phrasing. You might want to give heroine more attention, though
Squishy
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
deux_anges
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
An classic. Liked the descriptions of the growth and dialogue that added a sense of urgency to the whole situation.
Toymaker
Overall= 3, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
I'm never comfortable with stories about underage characters, but it was well-written, and very believeable. The BE levels were A-OK with me, and I learned more about corn by reading that story than I ever thoguht I would in my life. :)
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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