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The Overflowing Bra

Rubbed: The Beginning of the InstantBust Saga
This is the actual final "Rubbed.doc" file, the first contains no commentary. For those of you interested in real-life BE, InstantBust has probably been seen and researched. This is the author's pondering and rendering of what would happen if this stuff actually worked. Lengthy BE in graphic detail.
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Overall= 3, BE= 2, Characters= 3, Technical= 4

End could have been longer

Overall= 1, BE= 2, Characters= 1, Technical= 3


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