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The Overflowing Bra

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The Tauros Chronicles - Chapters 13,14,15,16
The next few chapters in the tale of Mercury, the newborn Tauros.  Mercury learns more about her body and fulfills a deep-seated need while performing magic never before seen by the others.  Afterwards, she's introduced to a world of violence and intrigue as she struggles for survival!
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Codeandrew
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Haven't finished reading it yet but the Forms pic really helped with imagining how things are being done and such.

Figment
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Haven't finished reading this latest installment either but I simply love the Size Chart. It makes for a very cute addition and helpful tool to understand the sizes and forms.

katheb
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

wow ,Magic ,action ,love and sex

and blended in so perfectly it works without feeling any sudden shift in momentum . im loving it .

PS:The pics are very nice they help in the visualisation [i also like the stats in the previous chapters ]

thank you for this


The artists prayer "May you increase in skill and your imagination never run dry"

Katheb out

intobigboobs
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Not much I can add to what has already been said. Love the pictures, still love the story.

IceOwl
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Uhm.. wow. All of it's really good, but I especially liked chapters 14 and 15. Can't wait for the next installment.

Pillager
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

The Tauros Chronicles only get better & better.

One of the best series, this site has ever been blessed with!

Cakeme
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

The story/plot is great chacters great, tranformations great except
one thing...a 'GREAT' bukkake sene. Could you add that.

BIG D
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

WANT MORE

sc
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

This is an incredible story that really nails a lot of fantasies dead on. I _really_ liked 14 and 15, but I hope this series never ends! I would be willing to pay for more!

Carl Marx
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

good Stuff, looking forward to more.

cygnus
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Write more. This is a promising story arc thaty i would like to see completed. Awsomeness

Anon
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Yet again, excellent quality writing. This is professional quality editing, a killer storyline, excellent character development, and everything a successful story needs. Keep up the good work; I'm looking forward to the next installment!

Rez
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

I loved your stories please please wright more =^.^=

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