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The Overflowing Bra

Milk Balloons
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The Tauros Chronicles - Chapter 7
Kate gives the newborn Tauros her first taste of swelling up with milk.
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 elvis interuptus
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 3, Technical= 4 
Whoo hoo Thanks and keep pumping these out!
 Quadhouse
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5 
A wonderful story.  Looking forward to more.
 Figment
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4 
Quite imaginative and a fun read.
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