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The next chapter in the story detailing the world of the Tauros, or werecows. A bit more is revealed about this mysterious sect of magical, sultry creatures.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.75
- BE: 4.00
- Characters: 4.75
- Technical: 4.50
V.
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Same as before, I wanted to tell you to keep up the good work.
Pillager
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I look forward to future chapters!
Bring 'em on!
Kheben
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Keep it up... It's hard to say the story is particularly enjoyable until you write more, BUT the setup thus far sounds like it has great potential. Also your writing style is pretty good. All I can say is - never be lax on detail during any sort of transformation scene, whether it be BE, TF, or whatever else! Looking forward to more!
Figment
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
The building of this story shows all the wonderful imagination and creativity of the author
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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