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An introductory chapter into a longer 'novel' detailing one man's journey into the sexual world of werecows, or Tauros. Reality begins to take on a whole new meaning as he discovers his sexual fantasies of gigantic, expanding breasts is real!
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.60
- BE: 3.80
- Characters: 4.40
- Technical: 4.40
Bb47
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
V.
Overall= 5, BE= 2, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
I think it's excellent how you've managed to charge the story with sexuality and suspense without jumping straight to anything explicit. Good job on that, and I eagerly await more.
Pillager
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I love the way you're starting slow & making us wait.
This storyarc has great potential!
I look forward to more.
Figment
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
I must agree with V. I think that the way you have set the pace of the story as well as the humanity of the characters is quite amazing.
Calamere
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
I think this is an amazing story and I've read all chapters up to 19 though I guess I'll only comment once. The work you put into this is amazing and I'd love to see more since all the sex so far has been very well written out and is usually quite easy to imagine, not to mention fun. I really like all the aspects, even the slowness of it like the others have mentioned but I can't wait to see what other creatures Kate encounters and what the spirit world has to hold for her!
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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