Three girls get lost heading to a party. When the discover an old building with a locket with some strange powers.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 3.89
- BE: 3.44
- Characters: 2.78
- Technical: 3.11
CKBeast
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
Good story. Really rubbed me in quite an interesting and likable manner. However, the transformation scenes seem to overlook the occasional middle part in descriptions. Overall short enough to keep me interested, long enough to get the necessary bits in, and all over quite appealing.
Kam
Overall= 3, BE= 2, Characters= 1, Technical= 2
Really could benefit from a re-write, and there was very little to the story line. overall Meh
Brain Drain
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
This is one of my most favorite stories here.
I hope BEman continues his great work.
Anonymous
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
This is my most favorite story here.
Rat Bastard
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
The animal transformations on top of the BE were just the thing for me.
vmin
Overall= 2, BE= 2, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
Well, that was a waste of time.
Pillager
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
I liked it.
I look forward to a sequel.
I can't wait for the Master properly groom his new pets!
Mr_Nuclear
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 2
Not bad, but the bold was distracting and should probably be rethought, and there were some random gramatical problems.
The hodrod
Overall= 3, BE= 4, Characters= 2, Technical= 3
It was a good story, but I would also recomend quotes and not the bold. The BE was good, but you needed more Character description. It just looked like some random growth without any point. But you are a very good writer, and I will be reading your next stories.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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