billmonroe11@yahoo.com
a balloon scientist with a transdemental viewer that also allows the user to remove things and persons from that dimention Saving the balloon girl from being popped for good.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 1.00
- BE: 1.00
- Characters: 2.00
- Technical: 1.00
Pyro9975
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 2, Technical= 1
Very poor, needs a lot of editing, not to mention more of a plot than, "I saved you, now sex time".
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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