The Overflowing Bra

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A good story, no doubt. 
What led me to initially read it, however, was the suggestion that it was the best of the MasterPC stories. 
While a good bit of erotic literature, a great bit of MC literature and a very good MasterPC story, I don't think it's the best MasterPC story; I think that distinction belongs to the sadly unfinished "MasterPC - Reloaded" by Lono.

excellent work!

I loved it.  A story that blends essentially realistic characters with a reasonable level of transformation, and excellent erotica.

The best MasterPC story I've read so far (still a bit of newbie to them I'll admit).  The story is entertaining, structure is excellent, the characters well though out, and execution was very good.  It's fun to have a MasterPC story that combines (semi)responsible use of MPC and the outrageous out of control.
I guess a little more BE would have been nice.  Other than that, Terry and Suzy developed wonderfully.  A sequel with them would be very welcome. 
Keep fighing the good fight, Mr. Pratt.

Good use of the MC license and not bad sex description, but a little lacking on the BE.  

GREAT story.  Not loads of BE, but a classic Master PC story

Nice, I agree with the others thoughabout the BE.

The Master PC universe is at its best when it's light-hearted, and this story is a great addition to it. I loved the different voices of the different characters, an interesting technique. One more editing pass to "flesh out" (ahem) the sex scenes and this would be damn near a perfect story! Great work as usual from a great author.

One of the better Master PC stories I've seen, as usual your writing is excellent but like the others said it was lacking a bit in the BE department.

Dude...damn...

Never have I seen such realistic characters, and I thought the mind control aspects were exceptionally well done. And I really didn't see anything wrong with the BE. There's only so much you can do with instant growth, so I think you did all right pulling it off.

And if I'm not mistaken, some of the things mentioned in the story were spun from discussions on the forum (the dialated pupils, for one, yes?). Nice touch. Good man.

One of the best stories I've read in a while. The switching between characters was a little confusing at time just because their were SO many characters, but it was great anyways. 

Not at all erotic.

Very well done! As others mentioned, a tad bit confusing with the multiple points of view. But one can deal with that. Better than most Master PC stories!

My favorite of the Master PC stories, and my favorite of the Bill Pratt stories.
I haven't been a fan of the Master PC story line in general - the ones I've read all seemed like the same basic formula, with little regard to consequences, and a fixation on brainless bimbos.  I stopped reading them as a result.
Bill writes very well - but his depiction of the antagonist in Baby's Got Blue Eyes was both so powerful and so disturbing to me, that I stopped reading his stuff also.
I heard so much about this story, however, that I felt I needed to give it a look.  It was certainly worthwhile.  Despite it being a much longer than average story, I found it difficult to take any extended breaks from reading it.
The perspective changes were fairly well marked; my biggest issue with them was naming consistency, specifically regarding Miss Kelly.

This is one of the better stories I have read in a while.  I like the thought, attention to detail, and most of all the language the author uses. This story was not just a nice story with good characters and even some character development, but a pleasure to read.  Please keep writing, so that we can enjoy more of your prose.

I missed a few bits on the BE-side, nevertheless very good. More to come?

Great MC story, write more!

Loved it. 

Sweet. Bit Hollywood at the end, with everything turning out well, maybe set your self up for a sequal. Would love to read it.