The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Eggs
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Mind Over Matter
Remarkable things happen to Janice's tits at lunchtime.
Average Scores:

Celina
Overall= 2, BE= 1, Characters= 4, Technical= 1

This is the ideal answer. Eveyrone should read this

The Almighty Popo
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Great story. I think it would have been better if her tits grew a little more, but that's a personal preference. That's literally the only slightly negative thing I can think of! Awesome job!

Very Free
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

I really liked this story, with a good ending. I was getting antsy, concerned that someone would walk in on them while they were at it, but everything ended up without problems.

DarkHeart
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 4

That was pretty well written, it seemed a little trite, but I did like the fact that Bob did feel conflict over what he was doing. Would be interesting to see where this goes and what caused the changes.

captain nice
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

Nice story, good description of characters and inflation.

private thoughts
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

Fairly well written; the only issue I found was the discrepancy from the description of her original size, and her reported bra size. Normally, guys will over-estimate a size or two. Bob, on the other hand, apparently over-estimated by three or four cup sizes (depending upon manufacturer).

It's very difficult to do instant without lacking in detail. This is probably the most valiant effort I've seen to accomplish detail with instant.

cmdr_mark@hotpop.com
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

Kind of curious what happened to Janice's boyfriend, and it's a bit unnerving how both of them just shut out their fiance's for a romp in the office, but igonring that, I really enjoyed reading this story, and found the characters interesting.

Benji Dude
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3

An interesting story with interesting characters, however it did end rather abruptly. I'm looking forward to the next part, please tell me there's another part coming.

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