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The Overflowing Bra

Cheviot
cheviot@cheviotsplace.com
Lost Girls - Apocalpse Rising
The Mothers of the Apocalpse are back in their latest adventure. When a forgotten evil is unleashed its up to the girls to discover a sixty year old secret in time to save the world.
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Rhemora
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

I just have to say an amazing story and Ill be waiting on edge until the next one comes out, I hope this continues to make a very long series

blank
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

Damnit Cheviot, you're too damn good. As soon as I started reading this I couldn't put it down. Really looking foreward to more

Quadhouse
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

If you don't have time to read this all at once, don't start. You won't be able to stop.

Daunte
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 3

I really like the story. It is REALLY long though, as mentioned. Not a bad thing at all, but it's taken a few sittings to get through. There is one thing that really got up my nose though... "drug" denotes a pill or prescription medicince, not the action of someone moving something. Dragging or dragged, or something completely different.

Gamma
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

I have been privy to the writing and building of the entire story line one bit at a time.....and drooled for more after each dose.Chevy is by far my favorite author in this field and this effort proves why..yes, its a long read.and hemmingway should have been so erotic and interesting....

Kowalski
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

I loved it. Especially the scenes where Robin comes to grips with her radical sudden growth. Her reactions were VERY believable and made the whole "wow"-sized scenario (which usually shatters the realism for me, in these typs of stories) really vivid and real. Great stuff.

tattered
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

One of the best pieces the field has to offer, past or present. My single regret (and not one big enough to downgrade any given score for) is the lack of a .htm or .doc version, since Acrobat's so unwieldy.

DarkHeart
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

That was indeed quite well written and probably the best of the series, even if some of it was a little disgusting. Wouldn't mind seeing something other than this setting from you, but please, write more. :)

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