The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Steve Palmer
Unknown
Christmas Presence
Making a Christmas wish, a young woman taking a train over the holidays finds her wish coming true.
Average Scores:

Mookie Johnson
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

I love this story! It's one of my all time favs and a holiday tradition. I wish there were more drawing but that would only take it from great to better!

trogdor
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

reading this really is like christmas

Gaffenheimer
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

This was one of my all-time favorites, and possibly the first BE stories I've ever read.

Dol-man_master
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Beautifully done!

hohob
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

AMAZING

lynxx21
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

One of the best stories out there.

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