The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Happy Holly Days
It's the same old story: Boy meets girl, girl visits boy in his chem lab, girl swipes experimental project that causes her to inflate in front of boy's's a Christmas miracle! 
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Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

Fun, with likeable characters. Thanks!

Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3

Good story as expected from you. I'd have liked it to be a bit longer but it works. :)

Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

Awesome story, I thought the size and delivery was nearly perfect. I really enjoyed the characters and I think the only thing that could be better is more detailed description of the growth/more growth spurts. Thanks for posting!

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