The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Bob
TITACIOUS TINA
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Above Ground Pools
Overall= 2, BE= 2, Characters= 4, Technical= 2

Strange but true. Your resource is expensive. At least it could be sold for good money on its auction!...

TheNewNo2
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 3

Really not good at all.

Kerry
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1

bad...

IceOwl
Overall= 3, BE= 2, Characters= 1, Technical= 4

This would be a great story, if it had more story to it. Virtually no description at all, of anyone, or much of anything that's going on.

JJ
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1

Never mind ....

cjpos
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1

Didn't even bother to finish. Fairly appalling. Like a really bad movie, I 'walked' out.

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