Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.50
- BE: 3.67
- Characters: 3.83
- Technical: 3.67
Toe
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
Bb47
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
tusdine
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Loved this story. I just wish it was a little longer!
J05h
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Top Notch!
Love the idea of infectious milk/cum hormones, really makes the story for me.
After I came the first time I felt compelled to go back and read the rest of the story (a rare thing for me)
Gaffenheimer
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Excellent story, with everything that matters!
Aaron
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
bobhhh
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 3
I liked the characters and appreciated the humour. The BE could have used a bit more desciption, but the sex in the car was very hot!!
IceOwl
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 2, Technical= 3
I really liked the constant use of double-entendre, but I still can't figure out why this guy is bored.
cjpos
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
The story cannot be read unless re-formatted. Goood thing I'm web programer. FYI, using IE to read.
bamf
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
good story, which is the most important part
jayessell
Overall= 3, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 2
I liked the story mostly.
Is there a rule that mandates that women become less intelligent over the course of a story?
I'm looking forward to seeing a story where women get bustyier *and* smarter.
(Feel free to use that. A woman has to become smarter to earn money/save her job/save the world but the smartness makes her breasts larger. (wow?))
Fort
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 3
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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