Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.83
- BE: 4.33
- Characters: 4.33
- Technical: 4.50
Fwoope
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Excellent! Maybe could have done with a little more focus and detail on the expansion focusing on how she feels as they grow, how they hang and obscure her body, etc etc, but excellently done and very wellwritten!
Doc
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Simply fantastic. Great main characters, great story, great writing. I can't possibly describe how impressed I am at how you managed to keep true to the BE, without throwing in any of the REALLY strange transformations (i.e.: tentacles, shemales, et cetera).
IceOwl
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
I love this kind of story, where someone has a power to change themselves and people around them in any way they want to. The difficulty is in carrying it off, which you do very well.
cjpos
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Nice story. I usually shy away when I see ment on the description but this time it for good purposes.
EveryMike
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Good story, I really enjoyed it.
btc
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
GREAT STORY! LOVED THE HUMILIATION ELEMENTS AS WELL AS THE TRANSFORMATION.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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