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Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.56
- BE: 5.00
- Characters: 4.56
- Technical: 5.00
Ark
Overall= 2, BE= 5, Characters= 1, Technical= 5
The story went fucking weird right after chapter one. Lost me completely.
I could stomach the switching and such, but the rape scenes and just bizarre story choice were a nogo
Bb47
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Reader
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Fabulous story! Well written but most importantly sexy! Best story on the site, in my opinion. Congrats!
P.S. I would love to see the rest of the story one day.
dranon
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Wow, I'll echo the sentiments already posted. This is fantastic, fantastic work. It's a true shame it wasn't continued— it absolutely deserves to be. Very impressive.
xxxecil
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Masterful work; I wish I'd discovered it sooner. Rife with foreshadowing background imagery that enhances the mood. And gloriously sexy. Of course, I'd prefer more sex, but relative to most stories, it certainly had enough.
vespa
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Nik
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
My only complaint about the story is that it breaks off in the middle.
michal
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
ApesMa
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I hope you've written the continuation. (Naming one of the characters "Eddie Miller" is a nice in-joke.)
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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