Now that they're happily back together, it's time for Matt and Emily to do a little more experimenting with The Sub-Quantum Arousal Energy Redirection Device. Part two of a three-part story.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.67
- BE: 4.33
- Characters: 4.33
- Technical: 4.67
Bb47
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
nobody
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
A very creditable second part. The story doesn't really advance but there's some hot stuff in here. Next time throw in something new - a new character or situation. But there's not a thing wrong with this one.
IceOwl
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
No real suggestions to make. I think it's going pretty good, and I can't wait for the next part.
s
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
This story is amazing! I want MORE!! I cannot wait until part three. Have you written any other stories?
hive
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Two words:
MORE, PLEASE!
'nuff said.
Sere
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Foxmaster5
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Very good second part. Cant wait for the third to come out.
allinone
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
It could be longer - thats my only suggestion. Well done. I'm waiting for the 3rd part!!
Barton Fink
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
An awesome story, I've really enjoyed it.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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