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The Overflowing Bra

Seraphina Brennan
wildfireindustries@comcast.net
Instant Pregnancy Pills
Young girl orders "Instant Pregnancy Pills", pills that cause a fake but realistic looking pregnancy and breast growth, and overdoses on them, thinking they're not real.  Well... never assume...
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 joe
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 4 
Good one, keep up the good work.
 Bobbytheghost
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5 
Pretty good story, I'd like to see a sequel to this.
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