A skinny runway model becomes a curvacious hooker after her mysterious captor employs a magic air pump to end her career. Bumpsgalore.tripod.com is now revived and updated, drop by and revisit old favorites and discover new !
Average Scores:
- Overall: 2.33
- BE: 3.00
- Characters: 1.67
- Technical: 3.00
DarkHeart
Overall= 2, BE= 3, Characters= 2, Technical= 4
While well written the actual story was...eh. While the girl did end up fairly sizable there really wasn't much detail given during the actual growth and the terms used were somewhat degrading. The other thing that I didn't understand is why she immediately leapt to the thought of being a hooker.
Fake_Name
Overall= 2, BE= 3, Characters= 1, Technical= 4
Yeah, feel similar to the previous poster.
The story was good up untill thepoint where she seems to think the only way she can survive is by being a hooker???
I Mean, c'mon there are so many other possibilities in todays world, What's the deal?
Prostitution is, well, kinda nasty.
Just me.
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 2, Technical= 1
God, normally I'm not this harsh but please, learn to write more....anythinger. Spell check is your friend, as is making sense. Why a hooker anyway? That's kind of a last resort.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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