Tom's friend refers him to an unnamed business that matches men's fantasies with women who have the same fantasies.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.25
- BE: 3.50
- Characters: 3.25
- Technical: 4.25
IceOwl
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 5
Some of the growth could have been a bit more descriptive, but otherwise a decent, well-written story
Anon
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Ending too short, after they get the changes they want, we don't get to read about what they do?
thame
Overall= 3, BE= 4, Characters= 2, Technical= 4
I found the characters a bit lacking in depth - typical for such a short story. I definitely agree with the first comment; this screams for a sequel. While the BE did lack some detail, there was certainly enough of it.
Aaack
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Excellent story, will we ever read a sequel?
Thanks for this fine story TSD!!
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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