BE Comic, with GTS. Drinks, 26 pages long. Lots and lots of BE. Very loose
drawings made when I was learning the art of BE. Check out other stories for
more recent examples of my work. Some notable characters from comics and a
few originals in this one. Enjoy!
Average Scores:
- Overall: 2.57
- BE: 2.57
- Characters: 1.43
- Technical: 1.86
legacyguy
Overall= 2, BE= 2, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
Lots of explosive clothing and breast expansion, but it was all done the same with little variation. Plus, the drawing is very roughm and the characters are mudane and pointless other than for breast expansion.
Also, the characters during expansion and after are out of proportion. If you take away the breasts then it will look like the characters are made of gum and their torsos are stretched long and thin. Even with bloated breasts they are still freaky to look at.
Overall, pretty sloppy, but cudos to you for actually producing the work. There may be people who can draw much better than you, but they aren't producing anything.
Mopey
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 1, Technical= 3
Hey, Well done again, ReadyArt! Lots of contageous breast expansion, with no reason, plot or even logical sense! If you have DC and Marvel characters in the same place, well anything can happen for any reason.
It would have been a bit nicer if you storyboarded a plotline to go with your "Drinks" theme. I have long been a fan of your art, and hope that you can someday take it to the next level. I believe that you did a fantastic job on the first pages of "The Lab", I would pay good money for your work to be cleaned up and inked.
Please keep up your good work!
Nobody
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 1, Technical= 2
Clearly this needs a lot more work to get up to the standards that this artist is capable of.
Ready Art
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
Wow. I truly apologize if someone downloaded this story and thought is was anything less than promised. I added this story at the request of another user and never anticipated near hostile feedback. Please check out my other stories if you like or just treat this one as it is - an early (years ago) comic story made when I was still learning the art of drawing BE. Nothing more, nothing less. If viewing it as a 'collection of scribbles' (heehee) helps then so be it. Please remember I can always use constructive criticism but simple opinion venting isn't so helpful. (BTW I added the medium ratings because I had to in order to post.)
you idiots
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 2, Technical= 2
People really need to stop biting the hand that feeds them. Destructive criticism should not be allowed on this board EVER. The moderators should make this clear.
brit
Overall= 2, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
Perhaps Ready-Art should team with a more capable writer. Collaboration might produce better results. At the very least, some sort of a real story to go along with the images. You don't have to alter your general theme so much (you seem to love it) but you could do with a lot of "fleshing" out (get it?)
this fucking sucked.
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
Biting the hand? Put down the hash pipe, idiot.
I really don't care if there's a steady flow of material that sucks.
Writing encouraging reviews for crap like this will just breed more of the same.
Oh, and by the way, this sucks.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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