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This was written for an inflation story contest. It's my first in a long time, please be gentle.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.67
- BE: 4.53
- Characters: 4.20
- Technical: 4.40
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Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Kanodin
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
I could find little, if anything, to critique this story for. Good short romp.
Halfelf
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Well written story. Nice work
Daunte
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Good work, all in all.
A few odd choices of words here and there. Only a minor quibble really, the meaning wasn't totally off...far from it, but still an odd choice of word to me as it interupted the flow of my reading.
Very nice short story, and being a vignette I couldn't bring myself to give the characters 5 even though they were well described and emotive. The impression of the characters was there but obviously there was no room for serious development :)
deux_anges
Overall= 3, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
ck-be
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
Quadhouse
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
MrBlacksmith
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Stretch
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
I liked the carechter's personalities as well as the b.e. description. I'm hoping you decide to continue it in fact.
GenericName
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
As with everyone else, absolutely perfect. Characters only scores a 4 because, as someone already stated, there's no room for real development other than a description of them.
Not that it really matters. Very well written.
que?
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Well done and enjoyable... what more can you ask for?
IceOwl
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 3
This is one kind of story I wish there was more of. My only complaint is that it could use a little editing and spelling correction.
Pringlesman
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Im just wondering where was the central male character during the story.
mrletters
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Slam dunk Wren. Glad to see you writing high quality stories once again.
ntsly
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I thought this one cute and sexy, nice job Wren :)
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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