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The Overflowing Bra

FirstWorkz
A mothers love
My first upload and story to the site, A story with love, sadness, death, revenge and a pair of happy endings (no pun intended) if you want part two mail me, see my e-mail address inside the story, if any spelling errors come up please let me know!
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Kaylan
Overall= 4, BE= 2, Characters= 4, Technical= 3

I'm not whorty to be in the same forum. ROTFL

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