The Overflowing Bra

Hi there, I have got to state, I enjoy your website. The colorings, the layout, the overall theme, they all go completely together. Anyway, that is all I really needed to declare.

Amazing.

I spupsoe that sounds and smells just about right. 

Nice story, I don't know where was final.

great developments, so ripe for mischevious deviantions.
i wait for the next installment

Fantastic! I like the way that the characters would shrink down again, allowing for another chapter of growth!

At first seeing this in the new posts I was a bit like "WTF wasn't this allready posted?" and than I read an noticed "Hey there is more here than last time" and then I was happy cuz I've been waiting for a conclusion... hopefully there is more to come ;)

I concur with The Dude. You should have mentioned in the story description that there were more chapters than last time, or you could have simply posted JUST the new chapters. But it's that big a deal.

please make more one of the best stories i have read

Overall

The only thing wrong with this story is I don’t really like
it. The pacing is a bit off and chapters five and onward feel as
though they were written by someone else. 

BE

Lots of it and fairly well described. A bit better described in
the later chapters and the reusable BE is a nice touch.

Character

They live to fuck and that’s about it. I don’t know
any more about them at the end of the story than I did at the
beginning.

Technical

Poor spelling. Grammar was acceptable (rated 4) up until chapter
five and then it goes down hill. The change to UK style quotes was
jarring, but easy to recover from since the change happens only once.

I think Bill summarizes most of what I would say. Your expansion scenes are good - though not excellent, and therefore not deserving of a five. Still, the descriptions are nice, though there seems to be a tendancy to switch to just sizes every now and then. Not a huge deal.
The characters were atrocious, in that there's really nothing in your story that makes me even remotely care about their fate.
The technical quality was so/so - nothing major, but enough mistakes that it was noticable.
As for the overall score, I just wanted nothing to do with the tale, by the end. If I'm glad that I'm finished reading the story (and it's obviously not because of some 'resolution,' which is still forthcoming), then I can't give it anything higher than a two. I can appreciate the effort in trying to give the couple different role-playing scenarios to try and prevent monotony, but if I'm not invested in the storyline in the least then there's not much enjoyment I'll derive from it.
On the whole, there are things done well in this story, and with a little more attention to detail it would have been good. The author clearly has talent with BE descriptions, and a better framework would offer an excellent opportunity for a really good work.

didn't suck, but some line wrap woulda been nice.

i think you should make a sequal, it was just so good i want to read on!

it had a really googd story line