The Overflowing Bra

95 prologue, and 5 Then she grew as big as a skyscraper, though even that isn't expressed properly. 

this story should be some where ells it has berly and B.E at all it more a fluff than any thing ells  

Why hasn't this been deleted yet? It barely qualifies as a story at all.

One day, something happened, and it was awesome.  But I am not going to tell you what it was.  I am just going to write the synopsis and give you 10% of the story.  
You know what, I don't want you to finish this story, as it's been years and years and you haven't, so you won't anyway.  What I want is my time back that it took to download this.
Avoid this.  It's nowhere near started, let alone finished.

please send over the next piece of the "Power of Wishing" story, thank you

"so hang on to your seats for BE/GTS story of the century."
At what point do you plan on finishing this story?  I've seen this elsewhere totally unfinished years ago.  But not only that, despite how little there is here, it reads as if it's a quick idea that didn't get fleshed out at all before someone began writing.

could u finish the story it seems to stop half way through 

Could you post this in a format people actually use, like .doc, HTML or plaintext?

Same problem.  Can't get the file to open in a readable format, can't find a converter.

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Would really love to read this, but the format is ?

If you're going to use Corel Word Perfect, you need to save it as a something extra dumb, like .rtf, .txt, or .doc so -everyone- can read it.

Completly off-topic and the story is only half a concept.

I agree with most of the rest of the reviews, use a format that everyone can read, I even have Word Perfect and didn't bother reading it.

Can't read it at all thanks to the format.  That's pretty important to a story.

Well, lets see...first of all, big friggin pain in the neck to read the godamn thing.  Then, the story's only like 1/4 done!!!! fix it!  It might be good if you fix those things...

Uhhh... Where is the BE?
Also, .wps files can be opened with word. However, word, and it's.doc file format sucks anyways. use .txt or.html .

Wow, this was just plain awful. After FINALLY being able to open the file, I was very very dissapointed. Actually, dissapointed would be an understatement. This was just...wow, words cannot describe how awful this was.

I have no real comment

It's not even done! Why didn't you get the rest of it done, and then save it on something we acan actually use, like .HTM?!

please finish i like it.