The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

In a world where breast size is readily controlled, Joanna competes to have the most fashionable breasts .... ever!
Average Scores:

Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

I like it. I didn't like her shrinking her breasts, but then the end showed that there is someone else out there still with the desire. I see a good opportunity for a sequel. If I were to be granted a wish for this story, I would prefer that it not feel rushed near the ending. Still, it's a good story.

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

Excelent example of a good story. I liked the description of the extream measures that she had to take to still live as normally as possible. Definately need more like this

Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

This was a great story, but it needs a sequel. I would like to see a sequel with Christina passing JoAnna's records by unimaginable proportions.

Overall= 3, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

Good quality writing and I did like the technical detail on the practicalities of having to live with really big breasts. However, by the end of the story they just got a little too big and in a way, I felt it detracted from the growing process (Being big was had become more important than the fact that they were growing). But this is just a personal preference.

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