While on vacation at a nudist resort, Rachel discovers that something in their milk is making her boobs grow ...
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.55
- BE: 4.64
- Characters: 4.09
- Technical: 4.55
Godmode
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Godlike story.llove how she controls her growth and slowly learns to enjoy it.
GODofMOUSSE
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Now this is really a story that I can get behind. Great descriptions!
Chameo
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 5
As always dude, fantastic story!
Toymaker
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 3, Technical= 5
A great read; the supporting cast wasn't totally compelling or convincing, but they got the job done. Plenty of BE(and ginormous boobies) with next to nothing to get in the way- just how I like it.
Slack Ratchet
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Nice work though I personaly would have liked to see her labia grow a bit more too ;)
nobody
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
A straight-up breast-growth story. No frills (no sex, awww), but very hot straightforward description. You've got a good base here, expanding on it by introducing another element, such as sex, more psychological changes, character development, supporting character action or other types of growth would make it truly great.
Shaynringan
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Definitely a well-written story. I agree that it was refreshingly straightforward in terms of getting to the BE but hardly boring. I enjoyed how the story was very consistent in terms of description, quality and quantity alike. Good length too, I enjoyed reading it, the only suggestion I have is like the others, to maybe explore other areas of growth? But what you do present, you do very well.
Mikey
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
vash
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
Excelent description of growth and reactions. PErhase even bigger next time
amanda_liddle@hotmail.com
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Wow
I totally enjoyed this story.
The lead character was in charge.
100 A+
Thanks
Amanda
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Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
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