The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Here's the complete version of 'The Deal' but with it's original title, 'Liz'.  Story of a smuggler who uses her womb to transport contraband.  In this particular case it's a snake.
Average Scores:

Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

Been looking for a full version for a long time, thanks.

I like the characters, and the story pushes some non BE buttons. It had enough of a story to keep me reading, but not too much that the BE etc came secondary. Good story man.

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