Here's the complete version of 'The Deal' but with it's original title, 'Liz'. Story of a smuggler who uses her womb to transport contraband. In this particular case it's a snake.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 5.00
- BE: 4.00
- Characters: 5.00
- Technical: 4.00
Somebody
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Been looking for a full version for a long time, thanks.
I like the characters, and the story pushes some non BE buttons. It had enough of a story to keep me reading, but not too much that the BE etc came secondary. Good story man.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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