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Sitting next to a huge woman on the bus leads a man to a fulfilling adventure.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.00
- BE: 4.00
- Characters: 2.00
- Technical: 2.00
Toymaker
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 2, Technical= 2
Seems like more of an FA story than a BE one, but the breasts are big enough so that it doesn't really matter.
The writing's not technically bad, I personally didn't feel the characters or the writing- the constant references to how "stiff" the male lead was didn't do it for me, but I did enjoy it.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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