A stranger makes Ann's Worst Nightmare come true, part 4. Comments welcome.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.42
- BE: 4.33
- Characters: 4.08
- Technical: 4.25
Name
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Mith
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
i like it so far however, the 12th addition has the 11th in the zip file
Caelon
Overall= 2, BE= 2, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
Decent story, I've read the other three. The only thing I don't like in this one is Anns constant "Don't look, or turn away" My god thats a turn off having to read her constantly saying that. Maybe tone that down a bit, instead of her being so outright in telling him not to look, kinda of imply it by her shying away or covering up.
Slanderous
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Good story here. Worth the read. Minor problems, but nothing bothersome. I gave it great ratings to balance the last person. (Caelon : If there was only one thing you didn't like, the ratings were a bit low in my opinion.) Otherwise I wouild give it 4s across the board. Keep up the story, please.
PeterBE
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
This just keeps getting better and better! Can't wait to see where these changes are going to go now, but I hope Billy takes fully advantage of his wish come true! This is good stuff; keep it up!
fivo
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
Perhaps the witty and magnanimous Ann will post a story to show us how it's done then?
brit
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
Not bad, not bad... keep it coming...
A little more description of BE would be welcome.
someguy
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
love the whole lot, keep it up!
amandda
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I loved this.
all of them in fact.
please email me sometimed
id love to rp
amanda_liddle@hotmail.com
bubba
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 3
Excellent Story, dont stop!
Green Goblin
Overall= 3, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Your BE Description, Characters, and Technical Quality are top notch. It is a true treat to read erotic fiction from such a skilled writer within a niche. Your story so well captures the teaser motif that I had no choice but to rate it a 3 for overall enjoyment. I don't enjoy being teased! I will keep reading in the hopes that one, two, and eventually several men have their way with her. For me, that would push the Overall Enjoyment category up to 6.
Serpen
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Thank you very much for that really nice story!
It is on of the best for me among "Overall Enjoyment". I put it in my favorite folder.
Hope this serie will continue in the near future.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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