The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Tate Mcleod
Into the Woods, part 1
Two young women encounter a witch in a cave, then drink some of her 'special' tea and suffer the consequences... (old story of the acotto archive; not sure any more was ever written)
Average Scores:

IceOwl
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

Holy fuck, I've been looking for this one every where lately! Anyone else that has any of the missing stories that were on Acotto needs to upload them now!

Stretch
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

Bottom line, I really enjoyed reading this one.

Nick
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

Were other chapters ever written? I would like to read them.

Hell-Scythe
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 3

Story was ok. I would have listed higher marks. I really enjoyed it, but the unknown if there is more is annoying.

XY
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3


Not much wierd, but I'm big fan of OddWierd.

TheFool
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 3

Happens to hit on more that one of my big fetishes. Really wish there were more written.

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